User talk:Yohmom/Sandbox

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The citation format looks good! That's difficult to get right :) I think you've made a good start on the characteristics. You might want to expand it a little bit - some pieces of it aren't so easy for someone unfamiliar with horses to understand (for example, "Wings of Atlas and a fused lumbar spine "). It's also best to avoide abbreviations (like NC). Some of our readers are from places that wouldn't know what NC means. Karanacs (talk) 01:02, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me too. You don't need to hide in the sandbox! By the way, 'hands' also is horse jargon: an encyclopedia article avoids unnecessary jargon ...and jargon is unnecessary almost all the time. Cheers! Wassupwestcoast (talk) 02:31, 9 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Do come out and play.... introducing numerous edits at one time might make it difficult for others to assist. No one will begrudge your efforts to add content to this nearly forgotten stub!--JimmyButler (talk) 00:07, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]