User talk:Yunjinlee

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Peer Review: Yangyang (CHO MIN SEOK)

I have had the pleasure of reviewing your article and I must express my admiration for your eloquent writing style and the thoughtful organization of content. It is evident that you have invested a great deal of effort and attention to detail in your work.

While your article is already quite impressive, I believe there are a couple of areas where we could further enhance its richness:

1. Visual Content: The article would benefit from more visual elements, particularly a variety of pictures related to the 'Festivals' section.
2. Geographical Details: The 'Sleep' section lacks specific geographical coordinates. Including latitude and longitude can provide clearer information for readers.

I hope these points help in refining your article. Rukkha1024 (talk) 06:06, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review: Cho Yena

Thank you for reading the article.

It was impressive that I used pictures in the right place to match the theme of fashion design. But I found a small error in the details.

In the first paragraph, we found a large quotation mark in the original but missing in the translation.

ex) "Apple" --> "사과" (O) "Apple" --> 사과 (X)

We will review other parts as well.

Also, I think it would be even better to explain concepts that the general public may not know, such as haute couture or proteforte, with examples.

I hope you'll finish the project successfully. Choyena (talk) 08:05, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review: 'Fashion design' to kr (Hyojun Kim)

I read your wiki article.

I could see the history of fashion design, but I would like to suggest some improvements inside the article.

Words such as 'Fashion accessory' and 'Jewel' are also registered in Korean Wikipedia, but they are linked to English articles links.

'Formal wear' seems to have to be modified to the Korean word 'dress'.

Please change the word 'luxury goods(고급패션)' to 'luxury goods(사치품)'.

You worked hard to write descriptions of many fashion industries in different countries.

Thank you! Jsmkimhj9 (talk) 09:19, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review : an article translating 'Fashion design' into Korean

Hello! I'm Choi Minjoon! Thank you for reading the article translated by Yoonjin! It was good to read articles about fashion design in Korean. There were a lot of terms I've never seen while reading the article, so it would have been better if I added a description of that term!(ex. Pretaforte)

But I think it's a great article overall. Thank you for joining the development of Wikipedia! Alswns001 (talk) 13:14, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review: 'Fashion design' Huangqihao

First of all, I read the translation!

But I found a problem

In 'Fashion design' -> 'clothing design',I can see parts that are not Korean like ' toile(muslin)'

It would be even better to translate it into Korean! Hkiho (talk) 03:54, 9 November 2023 (UTC)