Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Bobby Caldwell/archive1

Bobby Caldwell[edit]

I was actually quite happy when I discovered that there was no extant article on Mr. Caldwell, as he's one of my very favorite musicians and I've been following his career for quite some time. I've been honing this article since the summer, and it now seems to have reached a high-quality level of informational succinctness. Colinmarshall 02:50, 7 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Object, sorry. Lead is way too short. No references whatsoever. Also needs a music sample. Too many section headings and short paragraphs. Image:Bobbycaldwelladlib.jpg could use a stronger Wikipedia:Fair use rationale. I recommend Wikipedia:Peer review. Jkelly 02:58, 7 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]
- Where do you recommend I link to for a music sample? I did put this up for peer review, but it seems that nobody wanted to do any peer reviewing. Colinmarshall 04:49, 7 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  - Lack of attention at WP:PR can be frustrating. We tend to make our own music samples. See Wikipedia:Media help to get started on that. If making your own samples is not an option, or you need assistance with it, you can leave a message at User talk:Jkelly for more help. I should mention, however, that I think that the other issues that I mentioned are going to be of more concern to other commentators here. Jkelly 04:55, 7 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object. No references, lead is too short. The article is generally lacking information. It has the potential, though. I also agree with Jkelly, there are too many sections and the paragraphs are short. Refer to Wikipedia:Peer review for more suggestions. — Wackymacs 09:00, 7 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Object: This page need Needs references, better images, re-write and peer review. Giano | talk 13:22, 9 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]