Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Cold Feet
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was promoted 02:34, 13 December 2007.
Self nom. This article passed GAN in March and has improved considerably since then; prose has been tightened, better sources have been integrated and a stronger focus on summary has been implemented. The article is comprehensive, stable and has no visible bias issues. Brad 21:23, 3 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Support, a nice read. Redrocketboy 00:39, 4 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Well-referenced, Well-written
minor issues: overlinking - "spanish nanny"; parenthesis "([...]exterior scenes were shot [...])."
--Keerllston 22:07, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Could you elaborate on those minor issues please? Brad (talk) 23:04, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- No problem sorry for "da" brevity... here's "da" clarity -see Wikipedia:Overlinking (people usually know what a nanny is... not relevant to content try linking those in characters instead of in that sentence -it is relevant there...)- and - parenthesis usually mean that it's irrelevant or out of place, better styling to delete or move than to keep parenthesis.--Keerllston 10:52, 11 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Well I don't agree that it is irrelevant or out of place but as someone has already removed the parenthesis I've taken the sentence out altogether. I've delinked "nanny" in the casting section and moved it to the plot section (a link is necessary as "nanny" is another word for grandmother). Brad (talk) 11:12, 11 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- No problem sorry for "da" brevity... here's "da" clarity -see Wikipedia:Overlinking (people usually know what a nanny is... not relevant to content try linking those in characters instead of in that sentence -it is relevant there...)- and - parenthesis usually mean that it's irrelevant or out of place, better styling to delete or move than to keep parenthesis.--Keerllston 10:52, 11 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]
- Support, Comprehensive, well sourced. Good Lead/Intro. Cirt (talk) 20:04, 12 December 2007 (UTC).[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.