Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Dhanush filmography/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:30, 24 April 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]
Dhanush filmography[edit]
Dhanush filmography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Kailash29792, —Vensatry (talk) 17:11, 22 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
While the ROW sees Dhanush merely as a Kolaveri boy, he's more than just a singer in the Tamil Film Industry. I've modeled this list based on the existing ones and believe it meets the criteria. Look forward to comments and suggestions —Vensatry (talk) 17:11, 22 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Aoba47
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- Include an ALT description for the image.
- What do you mean by "debutant director"? It makes me think of debutante, but I do not think you mean that so I am not sure what this word "debutant" means.
- Debutant is masculine, while debutante is feminine. —Vensatry (talk) 07:24, 23 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Be careful about using the following phrase and its variations too much (commercially successful) as it can make this appear too much like a list rather than a cohesive narrative. I would add some variation and be mindful of this.
- You use the following transition (The same year) twice in close proximity in the third paragraph of the lead so I would change one of them for variety.
- While it is interesting, is the information about "Why This Kolaveri Di" necessary for a list about his film career? It would seem more appropriate for the article about him or a list directly about his music, but is it appropriate for this list?
@Vensatry:@Kailash29792: Great work with the list. Overall, everything looks to be in shape. Once my comments are addressed, then I will support this nomination. Aoba47 (talk) 20:12, 22 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- @Vensatry:@Kailash29792: Support: Everything looks good to me. Good luck with this list. If possible, could you look at my FLC as well? Have a wonderful rest of your day. Aoba47 (talk) 19:36, 24 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 06:21, 20 April 2017 (UTC)[reply] |
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Nothing else, it's a good list already. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:41, 13 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support my concerns addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:21, 20 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Skr15081997
- "All films are in Tamil, unless otherwise noted", this might be mentioned in a note in the "Notes" column header (like Note(s)[a]).
- He has a separate page for awards and noms. I don't think there's any need to mention them in the "Notes" column.
- Character and director names should be sorted by the last name.
- The redlinks can be removed.
- The Telegraph (Calcutta) should be The Telegraph
- The image is probably a bit small, you can increase its size.
- mob film is more American than a word of Indian English. --Skr15081997 (talk) 09:49, 17 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- @Skr15081997: Thanks for the comments. —Vensatry (talk) 14:50, 18 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Support: based on the above arguments and recent edits.--Skr15081997 (talk) 15:00, 18 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments by Vedant
Will take a look soon. NumerounovedantTalk 18:58, 20 April 2017 (UTC) Looks mostly ready, just some comments:[reply]
- The first paragraph barely talks about any of his roles in the films. In contrast, the subsequent paragraphs focus more on his roles. Just for the sake of balance you might want to talk about some of his early roles as well.
- "The following year" - The use of the phrase on the first two occasions might not be the most desirable as the release years for the preceding entries and never directly mentioned in the sentences. It's just what I feel, opinions might vary on this.
- "which was critically acclaimed as well a box-office success" - as well as?
- Maari and Thanga Magan are missing release years.
- "Dhanush had two releases in 2016—Prabhu Solomon's Thodari, a critical and commercial failure, and the political thriller Kodi, where he played dual roles." - This reads rather awkwardly, can be rephrased.
That's about it. Good job guys. NumerounovedantTalk 19:00, 21 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- @Numerounovedant: Thanks for the comments. —Vensatry (talk) 11:40, 22 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good to me. Support. NumerounovedantTalk 19:28, 22 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:18, 23 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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