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- General
- Many prose issues
- I can't run the dabs or links checker tool at the moment, they are down.
- The tools are working again, and everything checks out. Dabomb87 (talk) 21:21, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Lead
- The CMLL World Tag Team Championship (Campeonato Mundial de Parejas CMLL in Spanish) is a professional wrestling Tag team championship promoted by the Mexican Lucha Libre wrestling-based promotion Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL) since 1993. -- Tag team doesn't need capitalization.
- In early 1993 then-CMLL Booker Antonio Peña decided to leave the promotion and start his own professional wrestling promotion Asistencia Asesoría y Administración (AAA), when Peña left CMLL he brought a number of wrestlers with him, among them the then reigning Mexican National Tag Team Champions, Misterioso and Volador, leaving CMLL without a Tag Team title. -> In early 1993, then-CMLL Booker Antonio Peña decided to leave and start his own promotion, Asistencia Asesoría y Administración (AAA); when Peña left CMLL, he acquired a number of wrestlers, among them the then-reigning Mexican National Tag Team Champions Misterioso and Volador, which left CMLL without a tag team title.
- Fixed. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I also have another question, were the National Tag Team Titles able to be defended in CMLL?
- Yes, until AAA was created CMLL used the Mexican National Tag Team title as their main tag championship. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Its odd because the main article doesn't mention the CMLL at all. --Truco 503 21:47, 25 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- It states that before 1993 it was technically not exclusive to one Mexican promotion and that in 1993 it became AAA exclusive, that it does not explicitly state that it was defended in EMLL/CMLL before 1993 is unfortunate and something that needs to be fixed in that article, but none the less how it was. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:06, 25 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- On March 3, 1993 Canek and Dr. Wagner, Jr. won a tournament, to become the first CMLL World Tag Team Champions. -- Comma after 1993, and remove the comma after tournament.
- The current Tag Team champions are La Sombra and Volador, Jr. who defeated the team of Averno and Mephisto for the title on January 16, 2009. --> The current champions are La Sombra and Volador, Jr., who defeated the team of Averno and Mephisto for the title on January 16, 2009.
- El Canek and Dr. Wagner, Jr. holds the record for longest reign as a team, at least 608 days. -- 1)No need to pluralize plural2) in addition it would be best to add the footnote thats in the table here as well. 3)This sounds awkward but the last part needs to be reworded to , at at least 608 days. or , at 608 days at the least.
- Último Guerrero and Rey Bucanero hold the record for the longest combined reigns of any team, 1,185 days divided over three reigns. -- The comma after team should be changed to a colon.
- Individually Último Guerrero has held the championship five times for a total of 1,283 days, the longest of any champion. -- Comma after individually
- The team of Último Guerrero and Dr. Wagner, Jr. held the championship for 7 days, the shortest reign of any champion. -- Since this is about the tag team, champion should be plural.
- Último Guerrero and Negro Casas are tied for most title reigns with five each, while the teams of Último Guerrero and Rey Bucanero, and Averno and Mephisto are the only teams to have won the championship three times. -- No need for the comma after and
- List
- Why do the notes not sort by the least # of days in the days held column?
- Because I'm a dork who forgot to add the sort order, fixed now. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The key needs to have the column headers in bold
- I don't understand why you have different alignments, centering the # and days held column doesn't add anything to the table. Why not just left align it like the rest of the table?
- It has been commented in previous FLs that pure number columns should be centered, to be frank I'm not married to the idea and would be just as happy with left alight to be consistent. If only I could find the comment with the reason why numbers were to be centered. I'd like to know what the general take is on this and then correct this through out all my FLs and FLCs to be consistent. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- (Team Name if applicable)-->(Tag team name if applicable)
- defeated Dr. Wagner, Jr. and Satánico in the finals of an Eight-team tournament -- capitalize defeated
- Hijo del Santo and Negro Casas refuse to accept the championship after winning by disqualification, decision match is held --> Hijo del Santo and Negro Casas refuse to accept the championship after winning by disqualification: a decision match is held. (also link to disqualification)
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- Win the decision match --> Won the decision match
- The title was held up after a match against Averno and Mephisto ended in a double-disqualification -- link to disqualification
- Championship vacated after Silver King leaves promotion --> Championship vacated after Silver King leaves CMLL (consistency)
- Championship vacated after an inclnclusive match against the Headhunters -- 1)Do you mean inconclusive? 2)Who are the Headhunters? (the members?)
- Yes I do mean inconclusive, I'm sorry I let such an obvious spelling mistake through. I figured since the Headhunters team was listed earlier in the list with it's members it was okay to leave out the very "informative" (A and B) note but I don't mind putting it in. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Footnotes
- The reign of Shocker and Mr. Niebla lasted somewhere from 1 day to 293 days; the Último Guerrero/Dr. Wagner, Jr. championship reign has been confirmed as lasting 7 days. -- Confirmed by who/what?--Truco 503 18:59, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Confirmed by sources listed on the page. Guerrero/Wagner had a documented start & end date, Shocker/Niebla does not so it's verifiable that one title reign lasted 7 days, while it's possible that Shocker/Niebla's reign was shorter. MPJ-DK (talk) 21:41, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- You should state it as sources than.--Truco 503 21:47, 25 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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