Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Coachella Valley Firebirds players/archive1

List of Coachella Valley Firebirds players

Featured list candidates/List of Coachella Valley Firebirds players/archive1

Nominator(s): XR228 (talk) 16:31, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Keeping up with my trend of getting ice hockey lists to FL, this time, I'm doing Coachella Valley Firebirds players. I think this list meets all the criteria. Thanks. XR228 (talk) 16:31, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

I would change "54 players, 8 goaltenders and 46 skaters (forwards and defenseman), have worn a Firebirds jersey in at least one regular season game" to "54 players have worn a Firebirds jersey in at least one regular season game, comprising 8 goaltenders and 46 skaters (forwards and defenseman)," to remove any potential confusion that it's 54+8+46 rather than 54=8+46
"The Firebirds have yet to win the Calder Cup." => "The Firebirds have yet to win the Calder Cup, the trophy awarded to the AHL champions."
"who is "the only team members" - not grammatically correct
That's it, I think -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 22:29, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: I have made the changes. XR228 (talk) 23:26, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:30, 29 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

Tables need captions, which allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables without having to read out all of the text before it each time. Visual captions can be added by putting |+ caption_text as the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting |+ {{sronly|caption_text}} instead.
Tables need column scopes for all column header cells, which in combination with row scopes lets screen reader software accurately determine and read out the headers for each cell of a data table. Column scopes can be added by adding !scope=col to each header cell, e.g. !style="background-color:#FF670C; color:#000000;"rowspan="2"|Skater becomes !scope=col style="background-color:#FF670C; color:#000000;" rowspan="2"|Skatery. If the cell spans multiple columns with a colspan, then use !scope=colgroup instead.
Tables need row scopes on the "primary" column for each row, which in combination with column scopes lets screen reader software accurately determine and read out the headers for each cell of a data table. Row scopes can be added by adding !scope=row to each primary cell, e.g. ! {{sortname|Max|Andreev}}* becomes !scope=row | {{sortname|Max|Andreev}}*. If the cell spans multiple rows with a rowspan, then use !scope=rowgroup instead.
Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. This is not a full review, and does not result in a support vote. --Pres N 22:11, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@PresN: I have made the changes. XR228 (talk) 04:59, 31 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]