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List of Las Vegas Raiders first-round draft picks[edit]

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Nominator(s): Hey man im josh (talk) 13:38, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, getting close to finally wrapping up the first-round pick series. This list is nomination #9 in the series for me and, pending its promotion, would be #29 in the series to be promoted. This nomination's format matches that of other AFL team lists I've helped to promote, such as the Buffalo Bills, New England Patriots, and Tennessee Titans. As always, I will do my best to response quickly to address any and all concerns that are brought up. Hey man im josh (talk) 13:38, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from TechnoSquirrel69[edit]

I've been curious about reviewing one of these sports-related lists for a while now. Saving a spot for later. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 14:15, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for being willing to review my nomination @TechnoSquirrel69! For future reference though, it's unnecessary to reserve/save a spot. Hey man im josh (talk) 15:49, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm aware, I just like to put my name down to commit myself to it and to let you know you have a review coming. —TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 16:07, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments[edit]

  • "He he nine seasons" (in photo caption)
  • "The team departed Oakland to play in Los Angeles from the 1982 season through the 1994 season, becoming the "Los Angeles Raiders" during this time" - I would lose the last three words, as they could be taken to mean that they changed their name at some (unspecified) point in the middle of that 12-year period, rather than at the start
  • "The team has [singular] played their [plural]"
  • That's it, I think! Great work as ever, Josh! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for the review @ChrisTheDude! I've made changes based on your always valuable feedback :) Hey man im josh (talk) 19:27, 22 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:27, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Pseud 14[edit]

  • Founded on January 30, 1960, as the Oakland Raiders -- Possibly worth linking their old names Oakland Raiders and Los Angeles Raiders, as seeing they have wiki articles.
  • I also don't think you need to put their old names in quotations.
  • Oakland -- I would also link this, since you have linked Los Angeles.
  • Nothing else to quibble. Solid work as always. Pseud 14 (talk) 19:13, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image review: Passed

  • Images have alt text
  • Images are appropriately licensed.
  • Images are relevant to the article. Pseud 14 (talk) 19:13, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you so much for the review @Pseud 14! I've made changes based on your feedback. Hey man im josh (talk) 18:51, 24 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

MPGuy2824

  • Wikilink "wide receiver" and "return specialist" in the lead image's caption.
  • The note for Fabian Washington is missing a period after "Vikings".

That's all I got. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 10:31, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good catches, I've made the appropriate changes. Thanks @MPGuy2824! Hey man im josh (talk) 12:02, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support promotion. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 15:55, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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