Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Seattle Kraken broadcasters/archive2

List of Seattle Kraken broadcasters

Nominator(s): XR228 (talk) 08:48, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I think this list enough sources and enough prose to earn a spot as a Featured List. Feel free to review. XR228 (talk) 08:48, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

I think the lead image should be right at the top of the lead. This seems to me to be the norm.
Are there appropriate links for play-by-play announcer and color analyst?
"Olczyk would maintain his job at TNT as the lead color commentator and would call the Kraken's games as his schedule allowed" => "Olczyk maintain his job at TNT as the lead color commentator and called the Kraken's games as his schedule allowed"
"did the same for Olczyk and Piper Shaw for the 2022–23 season onward" - who's Piper Shaw? This is the first mention of them.....
Root Sports Northwest should be linked on first use in the body
That's it for me I think. The US model of sports broadcasting is rather alien to me over here in the UK but nonetheless I found this a clear and easy read -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:59, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude I have made the changes. XR228 (talk) 15:14, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:48, 22 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey man im josh

Columns have no scopes
What is "most games" supposed to mean? This needs to be defined in some capacity
What are the tables sourced to? It's not clear to me.
Add Wikilinks to sources in the publisher/website/work fields for consistency (several include links, while others do not)
Image of Alison Lukan should probably be cropped since it looks like the focus is on the hockey player
Date formatting in a number of these references are inconsistent, consider adding the {{Use mdy dates|July 2024}} template to the top of the article under the short description
Consider adding archive links the archive bot is back up
KPUG has apparently been an affiliate since 2022, according to the tweet used as a source. Can we do any better than this tweet? Given how long it's been, I would hope/expect that it's also sourced elsewhere.
Based on the source for the 2023–24 season, would this then mean that KPUG's FM station is no longer an affiliate? Or is this specifically citing stations which are part of the iheart radio network?
Throughout their history, Kraken games have been televised on Root Sports Northwest and radio broadcast primarily on KJR-FM. – This sentence is rather clunky. I'm sure they've been televised plenty of places, but was the intent to say they're primarily televised on Root Sports as well? Or just "radio broadcast primarily" on KJR-FM?
Image alt texts could be improved. "Man holding microphone" would be better as "John Forslund holding a microphone". These are meant to be a description of the image, we don't need to go into serious detail, but it's better that we note who's in the image when we can for someone who's visually impaired.
Additionally, if you don't want to crop the image, "Woman wearing headphones" is not a good alt description for File:Los Angeles Kings at Seattle Kraken - November 19, 2022 - Brandon Tanev and Allison Lukan (52519198214).jpg.
Add author to ref 15

Please ping me when you reply. Hey man im josh (talk) 14:00, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]