Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of The Bad Girls Club episodes (season 4)/archive1
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by Giants2008 20:09, 31 May 2011 [1].
List of The Bad Girls Club episodes (season 4) (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): AJona1992 (talk) 19:30, 3 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I feel, in some aspects, that the list can be a featured list. I am willing to donate my time in fixing any problems that anyone will bring up here. Thanks, AJona1992 (talk) 19:30, 3 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Quick oppose
- Avoid bold links in the lead per MOS.
- The lead tells me virtually nothing about the show. Look at other FL season lists for a guide to what to be aiming for.
- Bad Girls table, why is the last col sortable?
- "seven individual self-proclaim "bad girls" who..." grammar.
- "who move into a luxurious bachelor pad in Los Angeles who are dealt with numerous camera crew who films" grammar.
- "In every season of the Bad Girls Club one or more girls will be asked to leave the house either from violence or physical fighting which then gives the producers a chance at a new "bad girl" who arrives to the house in a day or two to replace the fellow bad girl" really needs a copyedit from a native English speaker.
- Look at WP:HEAD for how to format section headings (i.e. avoid over-capitalisation).
- Episode synopses are about twice as long as they need to be. Also all need a copyedit from a native English speaker.
- The notes have colourful squares, what is that all about?
- Some raw URLs in the references.
The Rambling Man (talk) 17:59, 9 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose - per TRM's comments, but mainly because the standard of prose is very poor. I can't even begin to work out what "Raged for her backstabbing UStream videos, puts the bad girl in question." means, for example..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:45, 10 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Note I will be fixing all concerns tomorrow. Thanks for the comments, AJona1992 (talk) 22:56, 12 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Any update here at all.......? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:50, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Question How long should episode summaries have? I didn't think I went "over-board" with what I did. AJona1992 (talk) 13:05, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Well this sort of thing is usually governed by wikiproject style guidelines, but I'll opt for WP:SUMMARY which would recommend just making sure you hit the pertinent issues of each episode. I don't think you're far off, but perhaps a 25% trim or so of the long summaries would be a good idea. Plus, have you addressed all the other issues noted here? The Rambling Man (talk) 18:50, 25 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Question How long should episode summaries have? I didn't think I went "over-board" with what I did. AJona1992 (talk) 13:05, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Any update here at all.......? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:50, 16 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Note I will be fixing all concerns tomorrow. Thanks for the comments, AJona1992 (talk) 22:56, 12 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.