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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by User:Matthewedwards 20:26, 11 October 2008 [1].

List of number-one Billboard Top Latin Albums of 2003[edit]

I am nominating this list because I think is ready to achieve FL status. Jaespinoza (talk) 19:42, 29 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support - once again another great list, Jaespinoza you are doing a fine job on these Billboard albums of the year, you must know the FL criteria by memory :)--SRX 00:08, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • What makes http://acharts.us/album/12862 a reliable source?. Answer: I got rid of the reference, I did not needed it.
  • Current ref 10 (Almas del Silencio) needs to not the language it is in. Answer: DONE! Jaespinoza (talk) 17:58, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Otherwise sources look good, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:06, 30 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose Comments because of the items below

Resolved comments from Gary King (talk) 20:53, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • capitalize Internet in the article
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  • "both physical and via digital downloads" – "both physical and digital" – is sufficient
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  • "in United States." – "in the United States."
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  • "the first album released by Spanish trio Las Ketchup" – does this album have a name?
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  • "colaboration" – "collaboration". Spelling mistake.
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  • be consistent; either "number one" or "number-one"
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  • "year, twice " – "year: twice " – or – "year – twice "
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  • "two times as" – "twice as" – can be twice as well; would be easier to read
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  • "the top spot of this chart" – "the top of the chart"
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  • "Mexican singer Luis Miguel released his fifth number-one album," – there's absolutely no context to this; at least give a date or something; is this his latest album? I'm assuming it is; but he could also very well have released, say, ten albums and then this sentence becomes pointless in that case
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  • "while fellow Mexican norteño music band Los Tigres del Norte peaked at the top for the fourth time." – same as above
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  • "Ricky Martin with Almas del Silencio" – "Ricky Martin's album Almas del Silencio" – or something along those lines; he did not debut with the album. The album debuted.
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  • "also hit the number one" – there are several verbs to use here; I don't think "hit" is a good one. Use different variations of "reach".
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  • generally I think "this chart" should be "the chart" as it's assumed you are talking about the page that we're currently looking at
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  • "Ednita Nazario, Bronco and Pepe Aguilar peaked at number one for the first time." – same as above; give some context. Dates, perhaps? This could very well be outdated fairly soon.
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  • The last paragraph doesn't seem to flow as well as the previous ones.
    • FIXED!


Gary King (talk) 06:44, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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