Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/NBA Sportsmanship Award
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 13:42, 13 July 2008 [1].
NBA Sportsmanship Award[edit]
It looks pretty good and seems to fulfill all criteria. So.—Chris! ct 22:41, 3 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment Could a symbol also be used, in addition to the blue background color, per WP:ACCESS? Gary King (talk) 23:27, 3 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Annoyomous24 (talk) 01:14, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment - Excellent job Chris. Would you mind adding something that shows the players who have been elected in the Hall of Fame? « Milk's Favorite Cøøkie 17:13, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Support - Nice work. « Milk's Favorite Cøøkie 21:19, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- Worth noting in the lead all winners have been US except for the one Brit.
- Not sure you need the "mission statement" (for want of a better phrase) in italics.
- em-dash doesn't need a space before or after it (see WP:DASH for clarification).
- "30 players from across the league compete for this award (each team nominates one of its own player)" I'd reverse this sentence so we logically see that each team picks one player so 30 are nominated in total.
- "From a pool of 30" must be "the pool" now, not just a non-specific pool.
- Preferably put references in numerical order unless there's a good reason to have [2] in front of [1].
- Since some refs I used in the table came from the lead, they are not in numerical order.—Chris! ct 22:07, 8 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- "NBA players voted on this award" just "vote" is grammatically right.
- "The last four awards have gone to alumni of Duke University, with all three recipients (one being two-time winner Hill)..." I get it, but it's confusing.
- I remove the sentence all together. It is trivial fact anyway.—Chris! ct 22:07, 8 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Is there an NBA lists category for this list?
The Rambling Man (talk) 13:50, 8 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
CommentsSupportAvoid parentheses in the lead. - 'one for each NBA team" and "three Spurs..."Be consistent with other award pages; for example, colors and nationalities.I think it's time we start linking to the right seasonal pages, the ones with endashes.