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In the article, "The Tell-Tale Heart," it has some errors that need to be corrected.

1) "was first published," is in the passive voice

2) a comma needs to be added here.... " the gender of the narrator [comma] and other details are left unclear.

3) "been speculated," is also in the passive voice

4) the words "sort of" is a creative language.

5) Remove the comma " veiled secret [no comma] or power.

6) Word choice "Stark Contrast."

7) The article uses a direct quote from the story; it needs to be cited and quoted, "never wronged."

8) This statement is ambiguous, "the old man is a father figure."

9) Punctation: "The victim was an old man with a filmy "vulture-eye[add comma]"[erase comma]."

10) Opinion: "Ultimately, the narrator's feelings of guilt, or a mental disturbance."

FatCookies123 (talk) 16:39, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]