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20–20–20 club[edit]
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I believe this page could be on its way to becoming a featured list. But first, I would like to get a peer review to give me feedback on what, if anything, needs to be tweaked/fixed about this list.
Thanks, Bloom6132 (talk) 17:11, 16 June 2012 (UTC)
Comments
- "club, reaching the milestone in 2007." image caption, I'd say ", both reaching..."
- "was the first to join the club" probably better to say "was the first to achieve this"...
- "Of these, 5 were left-handed batters, 1 was right-handed and 1 was " five, one, one...
- "Brett and Rollins collected more than 200 hits alongside achieving 20–20–20." ref?
- Last sentence of third para is unreferenced.
- If this publication is so major, why not name it? (Baseball Digest)
- You should probably mention the 20-20-20-20 club in the lead as it should summarise the article.
- Don't overlink in the lead (e.g. home run, doubles etc are linked multiple times).
- "Willie Mays reached both the 20–20–20 club and the 30–30 club " this caption needs reference and some explanation needs to be provided as to what a 30-30 is.
The Rambling Man (talk) 10:36, 22 June 2012 (UTC)