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2007 Appalachian State vs. Michigan football game[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because it recently failed to pass at FA. It has previously undergone a major peer review but there are still minor issues that need to be addressed. In particular, this article needs a full source check and possibly a copyedit.

Thanks, Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 17 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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