Wikipedia:Peer review/2023 Union Square riot/archive1

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to help with getting this article to GA status.

Thanks, Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 12:58, 30 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments after a quick skim:

Look for additional sources on Google News, Google Scholar, WP:LIBRARY, or your local library system.
The article lede is quite short. It should include information about the Aftermath, Response, and Analysis.
Why is the NYT source in the Further reading section not used as a source in the article?

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 00:17, 1 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done @Z1720, is that all? — Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 14:53, 2 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]