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Aaliyah[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that this article may be able to be taken to WP:FAC, though I would like to get some fresh eyes on the article. It passed its WP:GAN nomination just over a month ago and, seeing as the biography is fairly solid, would like to take it to the next step.
Thanks, — ξxplicit 05:43, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
Just a quick skim since I'm a little tired...
- Much of the article, especially the "life and career" section, seems to have a very insecure citation style. Must every little thing be cited 2 and 3 different times? I guess too much is better than too little, but it just looks...yeah, insecure. Also, lower-numbered references should occur first when two or more are used together. This occurs several times in the article.
- Why is the section on her death a subsection under "life and career?" I realize the section continues with posthumous releases, but that still strikes me as odd.
Might have more later. Alex finds herself awake at night (Talk · What keeps her up) 06:20, 18 October 2009 (UTC)