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Alkali metal[edit]

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The first article I started rewriting in 2011. It is one of the most important periodic table groups (the others being noble gas, FA, and halogen, C) and I intend to make it an FA, as it deserves no less.

Thanks, Double sharp (talk) 15:57, 19 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Parcly Taxel[edit]

Right, let's get started, eh?

Media are completely fine, appropiately licenced, no worry about them.
I'd object to the serial comma (as can be seen in the first sentence) – British English is used here. For example: characterized -> characterised in the third sentence.
The sections should be arranged like in fluorine now.

I could give more comments later but I am stuck up with fluorine's FAC… I need promotion now. Parcly Taxel 01:46, 24 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I rearranged the sections. A thorough check for British English will be done later. Double sharp (talk) 07:28, 26 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

British English:done https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Alkali_metal&oldid=620108016 Bogger (talk) 15:56, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, Bogger! Double sharp (talk) 17:49, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, scratch the resectioning: it's kind of hard to follow F because this article has extra sections (this is because it's a group). Double sharp (talk) 07:30, 26 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]