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Augustus Post

I've listed this article for peer review because over a two year period since the last evaluation, when it earned GA, I have continued to update it with appropriate images, stronger citations, and more detailed content than it had previously. Because of its success on Wikipedia the AAA auto club actually decided to make a documentary film on the subject and I was chosen as the chief historical consultant. The film has gone on to win numerous awards and it will be out on PBS stations in May. I believe, at this point, it should qualify for the featured article category.

Thanks, Hollykatharine (talk) 21:39, 25 January 2020 (UTC)

The Lead

Hi Hollykatharine,
Per MOS:LEADLENGTH, this article's lead is too long. Based on the article's prose size (currently ~32,000 characters (32 kB)), the article should have a lead that is ~3 paragraphs long. MOS:LEADCITE also states that citations aren't necessary in the lead if the information (which cites those sources) is repeated in the body (which it should be).
--Username⁶⁸⁹² 00:06, 4 April 2020 (UTC)