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Banditti of the Prairie

This article was just created. Any help would be appreciated as I am hoping to submit it for GA rather quickly. There is some minor expansion work to be done, I currently have the information and will be acquiring more so I will add it as I get it.A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 15:41, 6 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

bcasterline

A couple things:

"~~Banditti influence" is extremely vague. Examples (or just a clearer definition) of the kind of influence they wielded and how exactly they overstepped their bounds would be helpful~~. Done

I agree that it is vague and am thinkin of a new title. I think the article shows how they overstepped their bounds, clearly, they were lynched.A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 01:46, 7 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

~~The number of inline citations for the first source is overkill. It some cases there's the same citation after multiple sentences in sequence~~. { Done

Good luck. -- bcasterline • talk 22:28, 6 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

How is there overkill? Did I cite things that didn't need to be cited or do you just say that because there are so many? Thanks for reading and going through the article.A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 01:45, 7 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Changed wording, per above comments by User:Bcasterline. Done

If there is over citation I would like to know where because I think that I do tend to overcite and err on the side of caution, I don't want claims that should have citations to go without. Any help here would be appreciated, because I am way too cite happy in general. What should I do? Just cite grafs if they are attributed to the same source? Should that somehow be noted in the references section?A mcmurray (talk • contribs) 06:47, 7 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]