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Barney Gumble[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm considering it for FA.
Thanks, Tj terrorible1 (talk) 21:48, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
- Looking at the article at first glance I could find nothing wrong with it. However upon review of the citations I found a couple which were problematic. Specifically (numbered in reference to how it is written on this date) Reference 2 and 20 are both a bit.... well... their not idiot proof. What I mean is for reference two one has to enter information into a search form. Some people who are not very savvy get nervous around those. We have to consider such people so for that reference a more direct link to a published RS which says Castellaneta won that award would be preferable. Perhaps in conjunction with the search form. Which I used and gives a direct conformation of that award. For reference 20 it just says Richmond and a year. How about a title, ISBN or something that could be used to verify the source.
Aside from those two little and easily rectifiable issues, and upon review of the criteria at WP:FA? IMHO your article is 98% of the way there. In my book 98% is an A. So congratulations you have an article that needs a bit of work but is class A none the less. --Hfarmer (talk) 08:09, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: This looks much better than its last PR. Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement.
- The "Role in The Simpsons" section ends with Barney still sober - since he resumed drinking in 2003, shouldn't that be mentioned here?
- I also note the article on the episode I'm Spelling as Fast as I Can does not mention Barney at all, let alone his resuming drinking
- Could more details on critical reception of the character be included? Didn't his sobriety and/or his return to drinking attract more comments?
- Provide more context for the reader - I am not sure someone who is not a Simpsons fan would connect the Mr. Plow episode to The second, "Plow King Barney", was released in January 2003.[29]
- The quote in Creation uses {{cquote}} but according to WP:MOSQUOTE, {{blockquote}} should be used. Even that is supposed to be for quotes of 4 lines or more, but the quote on my monitor is less than 2 complete lines of text.
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 14:16, 23 December 2008 (UT