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Bethel Assembly of God Church[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because… This page was one deleted. It has been recreated with neutral content

Thanks, CE 09:36, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

I have edited the article a little to improve some of the basics. It needs some more work. Here are a few suggestions for improvements:

The article needs more reliable, independent sources. I have tagged the languages section as needing a reference, but most of the information in the lede and infobox is unreferenced.
If you can find good reliable sources, you could considerably expand the article. It would be good to see the history and development of the church. Apart from it's size, what makes it interesting and unusual?
You could add a section about the church's teachings (again, if you have a proper source)
What impact/influence has the church had on Bangalore, and the local neighborhood?
Expand on what the "outstations" are, and their connection to the main church

As it stands, the article is only barely demonstrating notability, though I suspect it is notable. I hope these suggestions help you think about how to expand and solidify the article. Best, The Mirror Cracked (talk) 05:21, 14 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]