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Bluespotted stingray[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because…
I am really eager to have a GA article and know there are things I know I've missed. But for things to really look out for would 1) be plagiarism... even the slightest bit. 2) Mis-content or lack of citation. 3) Grammar 4) Any additional help!
I appreciate this so much.
Thank You, Stanfordbound 14 (talk) 02:00, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
Comments by StringTheory11[edit]
- What does it's scientific name mean?
- A description of the differences between the Java form and the Bali form would help.
- What exactly entails a "true stingray?"
- More peer-reviewed sources would be nice.
- The image captions could use a bit more description.
- A lot of the sentences could probably be combined to make for a smoother flow.
- Predators section either needs expansion or should be merged into another section; same with conservation section.
- I can't discern at all what the parasites section is trying to say. I recommend a rewrite.
- What is the size of the ray, both length and weight?