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Boris Johnson Is a Fucking Cunt

I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to get promoted to featured article status, and indeed for the article to appear on the main page - again (it has been a DYK? and is currently a GA). I admit that I do like the idea of an article entitled "Boris Johnson Is a Fucking Cunt" to appear on Wikipedia's main page. I'm not entirely sure which bits need improving before it should be put up as a candidate.

Thanks, ISD (talk) 17:59, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

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Comments from mujinga

• Overall this article seems to be in pretty good shape
• Not sure about "aftermath" as the name of the last section?
• In order to flesh this out as a featured article, you could consider giving a bit more info on Kunt and the Gang. And also who did get the xmas number 1 in 2021? (a question i thought i would never ask)
• "All money made from sales from the single will go": thats past tense now
• Music Week can be linked
• As can all instances of Billboard
• "Cassetteboy again supported him, releasing a mash-up video of Johnson performing to "Killing in the Name" by Rage Against the Machine with a message to support the stream.[36]" - it would be nice to have a better source here. You can probably argue in favour of beyondthejoke.co.uk but it appears to be a blog
• For the rest the source seem pretty good
• Best of luck with the article Mujinga (talk) 00:12, 14 October 2022 (UTC)

@ISD: to ensure that they saw the above. Z1720 (talk) 02:14, 28 December 2022 (UTC)\

Commments from Eurohunter

@ISD: Just checked the article and I did minor fixes. Would you review song "Fest i hela huset" in return? List of issues of found:

• Music group was actually named "The Kunts" while release of single from what I see in cover and it would be good to introduce it in the lead. Eurohunter (talk) 22:07, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
• ""Boris Johnson Is a Fucking Cunt" was originally released as a track on the album Kunts Punk in Your Face in July 2020.[1][2]" - there could be exact release date if there is any source for it and the date is actually known. Eurohunter (talk) 22:07, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
• "Safe-For-Work Sausage Roll Remix" - is capital at "For" needed? Eurohunter (talk) 22:07, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
• "The single's artwork is a parody of The Sun newspaper." - reference? Eurohunter (talk) 22:07, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
• "All 23 versions of the song were later released as a single extended play." - what is name of this extended play? 22:07, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
• If "UK Singles Downloads Chart" and "Official Audio Streaming Chart" are mentioned in the text they should be also included in "Charts" section. Eurohunter (talk) 22:07, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
• "The band made all three songs available for free on BandCamp, with Kunt instead suggesting that people should donate money to Mind." - what is "Mind"? It's linked above but this is the other section and it should be linked again. Eurohunter (talk) 22:07, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

• I think you meant to ping @ISD:, the PR nominator. Z1720 (talk) 22:10, 1 January 2023 (UTC)

@ISD: It has been over a month since comments were posted above. Are you still working on these, or can we close this PR? Z1720 (talk) 20:15, 4 February 2023 (UTC)

Feel free to close. ISD (talk) 10:16, 6 February 2023 (UTC)