Wikipedia:Peer review/Brevard County, Florida/archive1

Brevard County, Florida

I've listed this article for peer review because I have the goal of improving it to a state where it could pass a GA nomination. A year ago, it was a mess of content of questionable value, crudely organized, and outdated. It might still be, so I’m looking for feedback, insight, and suggestions on where my effort is best spent with the goal in mind.

Thanks in advance for wading through this lengthy article! Zsinj^Talk 01:34, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

• There should be a citation at the end of every paragraph, minimum (except the lede).
• The "Geology" section is quite short. Can this be merged with another section, or expanded?
• Avoid short paragraphs that are one or two sentences long, and try to merge them together or expand them.
• "Social services" should be expanded.
• "Economy" section still needs to be updated with the latest stats, per the orange banner at the top of that section.
• "Banking" "Retail" and "Private charities" should be expanded, merged or removed as it is too short.
• "Former place names" should be expanded upon with examples.
• "Sports" should remove the level 3 headings and merge this together.

I would suggest continuing to find sources to add to the article, and considering removing anything that you cannot find much information for. Hamilton, Ontario is a great article to use as a template. Z1720 (talk) 20:45, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate the areas to expand since I’ve kind of been focused on pruning seemingly unencyclopedic material from the article. Zsinj^Talk 00:23, 16 November 2023 (UTC)