Wikipedia:Peer review/Carl Radle/archive1

Carl Radle[edit]

I nominated this article for peer review because I would like this article to meet the standards of Wikipedia, because this is the hardest I've worked on an article about a person. So I would like it to be the highest quality of article, also because Carl Radle was a fine musician, and doesn't deserve to have just a little article with no information other than, "He was in Derek and the Dominos". Private Butcher 03:04, 4 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Nice start to the article! You've done a nice job so far. Here's what I would suggest to make it better:

Your intro should summarize the article. Dates for birth and death are usually put in parentheses following the name. It would also look nice to move the picture next to the intro.
You mention "The Tulsa Sound." What characterizes that? A description of it would be most helpful.
The article has quite a few red links, it would look nicer to start stubs for these links.
Please list your sources.
Inline citations would also help.
The article should be in some categories.
Names of albums should be listed in italics and see if there are articles on the albums you can link to.

Bon chance! Ganymead 03:52, 4 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Agree with the above. Please also take a look at articles that have made the cut. Compare your article to those articles. Check for prose, sections, length etc. =Nichalp «Talk»= 04:59, 4 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Just rewrote the entire aritcle, what do you think now? Privat e Butcher 00:39, 13 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

It looks pretty good - but it needs references before it'll pass FAC :). 03:08, 16 October 2005 (UTC)