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I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to see if it is written well and has all the possible criteria for a FL nomination.

Thanks, Kekkomereq4 (talk) 18:36, 4 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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  1. compare your list with the recently featured list Clint Eastwood filmography.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 11:47, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  2. The whole Motion Pictures section should be removed, this is already handled in her article and the list is about her filmography only and not her career.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 11:47, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done Kekkomereq4 (talk) 17:26, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • I've removed the section, but can I leave the sentence about the upcoming films and sections about Documentary and On Stage?
      • Yes you can leave that. BTW was the content a copy from her article? If not you can use it to improve the intro to the filmography list. And please move the info about her upcoming movie to before the table cause most lists add the prose before the table.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 19:21, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
      • Ok, done. It's not a copyedit, you can see here: Cher main article. Kekkomereq4 (talk) 18:31, 7 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  3. The lead should be expanded to define the scope of this list.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 11:47, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • Added more info about her awards and info about song. The lead needs more now? Kekkomereq4 (talk) 17:58, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  4. Since there are no colspans why not make the list sortable?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 11:47, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done Kekkomereq4 (talk) 21:16, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • I've edited both list about film and commercials. The section about Film roles associated with Cher needs this edits??
  5. The section "Music from motion pictures" should be moved to either Cher albums discography or Cher singles discography.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 11:47, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  6. Didn't she write any films?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 11:47, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    •  Done Kekkomereq4 (talk) 19:57, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • No she didn't. Some movies that she writed but never made are listed in the section "Film roles associated with Cher".
  7. Remove anything relating to her Music videos since this is handled in her discographies.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:06, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  8. http://crawleyscastingcalls.com/index.php?option=com_actors&Itemid=56&id=572&lettre=C seems unreliable.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:06, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  9. The Cher's Movie Box Office external link goes to Box office mojo and not the specific sources page.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:06, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • The documentary section could be merged with the table before it (Put the documentaries as titles and her as herself)--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 17:29, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • Can I leave the table only with her films? There are too many documentary about Cher, I've adden only the most important.Kekkomereq4 (talk) 19:51, 7 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
      • It seems documentaries aren't considered films, see Film. The section should be removed. Maybe only documentaries that were released to theaters and ranked in the BOX Office considered documentary films.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 18:04, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  •  Done Kekkomereq4 (talk) 22:07, 7 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • I've removed the section.
  • The on stage section could be merged with the lead.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 17:29, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  •  Done Kekkomereq4 (talk) 19:47, 7 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Why is the table in "Film roles associated with Cher" different from the other ones?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 20:38, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Could u make the tables sortable by year, production company and Box Office?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 20:38, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  1. It would be best if the lead was structured as follows:
    1. An introductory paragraph, saying how many films she released and her general career (her history before the first film release in the filmography).--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 20:38, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    1. A paragraph about the films she released and any remarks about them (Add the intro of Filmography there). This might also include commercials.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 20:38, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    1. A paragraph about the last section (Film roles associated with Cher).--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 20:38, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  1. "Commercials" and "Film roles associated with Cher" don't need to be sortable.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  2. You should reduce the Movie information column width in "Film roles associated with Cher", to increase status width
  3. Do u have any references for the commercials?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  4. You have some "Citation needed" tags, please address those.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  5. Change "Movie information" to notes.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  6. The sorting of US BOX Office has problems because of the dashes (When you click four times it stay on the dashes as first). Fix this by adding sort keys.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  7. What does # mean in Commercials?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Why did u bold the titles on "Film roles associated with Cher" and not the others tables?
  2. Remove "(see below)" from the lead.
  3. Could u have a column in the Filmography table for her role (lead actor, supporting actor, cameo...) in the films?
  4. Burlesque's producer is "Screen Gems".
  5. Find a better reference than "TV interview, The Ellen DeGeneres Show"
  6. "This is a chronological list of films in which Cher has appeared." no need for that
  7. Try to reduce the films mentioned in the lead a bit. Only mention films that are really notable in her career and not every film like the ones in 1987.
  8. You need to copy edit the whole lead. You have many sentence structure and grammar problesm. Here are few:
    • Cher has starred in various international television commercials (see below), as well, she was a high profile print advertising for her friend Lori Davis (1992).
    • After in the same year she started her film career with Sonny Bono in the poorly received-movie Good Times[1] and later as a solo actress in the low budget feature Chastity.
    • was a lesbian who worked in at the Kerr-McGee plant in Cimarron, Oklahoma.
    • directed by Peter Bogdanovich and with Eric Stoltz, Sam Elliott and Laura Dern.
    • In particular, Cher, in the lead role, has received positive reviews.
    • During 1989-1991, Cher refused many roles.
    • She was also nominated twice for the Academy Award but she won only one time in 1987 for Best Actress in a Comedy for her role in Moonstruck.
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