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Crater Glacier[edit]

I saw this was tagged so I am opening the thread. I'll make comments later, but it appears this article needs some more refs and the images need to be less crowded.--MONGO 06:11, 3 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Review by Spebi

  • The ref in the opening sentence should be added to the end of the sentence.
  • The opening paragraph (before the TOC) should be split into smaller paragraphs, for easier reading.
  • The refs at the end of the opening paragraph (and throughout the article) should not have spaces between eachother, and should be added immediatley after the full stop. (Example: Sentence.<ref> and not Sentence. <ref> or Sentence<ref>.)
  • Try finding some relevant categories, and add the article to these categories. Don't add too many irrelevant categories, though.
  • Not sure though, but I think the coordinates are ment to be placed in the top right hand corner of the page (along the title line), but if the infobox has a place for them, then they should be placed in there.

Good luck with the article! :) Sebi [talk] 06:20, 3 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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