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David I. Walsh[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd appreciate someone else's assessment of its NPOV. Also a review of its quality rating.

Thanks a bunch, Bmclaughlin9 (talk) 00:24, 1 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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It's currently C-class. If you want to get it to B, I suggest increasing the intro to fulfil WP:LEAD and the last two sections about personal life and death.

RB88 (T) 16:51, 6 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Right, I've copyedited the whole article and made it more in line with Wikipedia policy. Things to do include:
- Adding a few more citations to solidify the political career.
- Using all/finding more scholarly sources on the subject.
- Initiating a constructive discussion with experienced bio editors and experts on the subject about the POV and OR material I've put on the talk page.

RB88 (T) 17:46, 6 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]