Wikipedia:Peer review/De Lorean DMC-12/archive1
DMC DeLorean[edit]
This is my favorite cars of all time. With its gull wing doors and stainless steel body, its hard to beat! The article has far to go, and any comments will be appreciated as I want to get this to featured article status, as it deserves it. — Wackymacs 21:55, 3 December 2005 (UTC)
- It looks to be an excellent article. I only saw a couple of minor nits that you may get dinged with when you go for FA: the "Special DMC-12s" section uses a bulleted list, rather than normal prose; also they'll undoubtedly want you to use the reference to citations format for the notes, as discussed at Template talk:Ref. — RJH 18:14, 7 December 2005 (UTC)
- I've fixed the problems you've mentioned and improved the Production changes section and 'Special DMC-12s' section too. I've also cut down the picture usage in the article. The article now has a Notes and References section. Anything else? — Wackymacs 21:09, 7 December 2005 (UTC)
- Yes it looks good. I'm not sure how you feel about scale model kits, but you could cover that topic if you're interested. Possibly also the used car market for these De Loreans. But it's fine as it stands right now. Thanks — RJH 16:55, 8 December 2005 (UTC)
- I've fixed the problems you've mentioned and improved the Production changes section and 'Special DMC-12s' section too. I've also cut down the picture usage in the article. The article now has a Notes and References section. Anything else? — Wackymacs 21:09, 7 December 2005 (UTC)