Wikipedia:Peer review/Deerfield High School (Illinois)/archive1

Deerfield High School (Illinois)[edit]

I have done extensive work on this article and would greatly appreciate some imput as to further improvement. (Thanks) omtay38 03:16, 17 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

A section on the school's history would be useful. I'm also wary of that School Chest image's use of under-18 students without parental consent. Is that an issue here? --SparqMan 16:22, 19 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed on the history section, i've been looking for information. I didn't think about the image and your probably right. Will remove it now. --omtay38 16:41, 19 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The detail on the theaters is great (the new wing finished just after I graduated), but maybe excessive. That section almost dominates the articles, as is. --SparqMan 16:48, 19 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I see what you mean, however, I feel rather than removing content from the theatres section, the other sections should have information added to be as detailed as the theatre section. --omtay38 08:51, 28 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 15:34, 21 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much! Suggestions being taken into account! --omtay38 09:03, 28 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

1) There should be a References or Notes section instead of just external links. 2) History should be before Campus. 3) Notable student organizations should be added into a Student Life section and combined with Annual activities. 4) Notable alumni not nearly comprehensive enough. Students section should be renamed like Profile or something. 5) All sections need major expansion. See Stuyvesant High School and Plano Senior High School. -Bluedog423 06:48, 7 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]