Wikipedia:Peer review/Dog Day Afternoon/archive1
Dog Day Afternoon[edit]
A film from my "Best All Time" list that I've worked up pretty heavily over the past week to grow past a messy, unsourced, unorganized, stubby article. I've added whatever I can find that I have felt the article needs, and I'd love to know if anyone sees something that could be added/changed! Thanks in advance. Staxringold 15:36, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
- Expand the lead per WP:LEAD. --darkliight[πalk] 16:40, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
- Done. Staxringold 22:00, 30 April 2006 (UTC)