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Ellen van Dijk[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I tried to improve the article a lot. Besides changes in text I made a few choises. I inserted all the results of National, European and World championships in two tables. I removed the results in these championships out of the list of major achievements, and I made criterea for the list of major achievements. Thanks, Sander.v.Ginkel (talk) 18:16, 1 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lemonade51 comments -- Thank you for work on this article; at present this is a short one. I suggest before you nominate this for WP:GAC, it must be expanded so I recommend you take the time to look for more information.

Instead of brackets for her nickname in the WP:LEAD, use quotation marks → Eleonora "Ellen" van Dijk
No need to put a citation in the lead, you can remove it.
The lead must provide a summary of the whole article. In this case, although the reader knows about her achievements, there is nothing about her early years.
For inspiration, take a look at other cycling profile articles, which are related to your topic. I would recommend Alberto Contador , Erik Gjems-Onstad or Ian Browne (cyclist).
Is there nothing you can find about van Dijk's reason for taking up cycling? Nor about her family? Is she married, or single?
Put 'Study' in a separate section, it does not need to be merged with her career.
Several references need an accessdate (the date you obtained the ref and put it onto the article).
There are two dablinks. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 16:24, 18 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]