Wikipedia:Peer review/Emily Ratajkowski/archive2

Emily Ratajkowski

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because I would still like to get this article to featured and WP:TFA in time for the subjects 25th birthday in June 2016 if someone can help me to get it cleaned up enough.

Thanks, TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 19:15, 2 November 2015 (UTC)

Comments from White Arabian Filly

• In the infobox, I think it'd look better to say "model, actress" with a comma instead of the bullet point that's there.
  • Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:25, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
• In the lead, there needs to be a comma somewhere in the sentence about "the most popular song of the year 2013", it's sort of confusing.
  • I believe it is properly punctuated. What is the confusion?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:27, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
• It's sort of weird having the list of videos on the middle of the article.
  • Are you talking about the external video links? Where do you think they belong or are you suggesting the article would be improved if they were removed?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:29, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
• Is there any way to combine the tabulated lists of her movie roles and appearances so they are all contained in one table?
  • Pardon me, but these tables are standard format for WP. I am sort of getting the feeling that you are giving advice outside of your area of expertise on WP.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:30, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
• It'd be good to have a photo of her at the top in the infobox if one is available. White Arabian Filly (Neigh) 20:52, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
  • I agree. I would love to find one.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:31, 8 December 2015 (UTC)