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Energy in Vietnam[edit]
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I've listed this article for peer review because:
1. I wanna get reviews by other people for the content of this page. My aim is writing this article to be good enough so it can be a Good article. I wonder which information/things should I add/do more to elevate it to a Good article?
2. If this article is not qualified to be a Good article, then can it be A/B/C article level?
Thanks, Tống Minh Quân (talk) 03:34, 26 September 2019 (UTC)
Some suggestions to consider[edit]
See also Wikipedia:Peer_review/Renewable_energy_in_Vietnam/archive1
A lot of numbers but need more graphics and summary and analysis.
Summarize the country's energy policy.
Ownership and regulation?
Affordability vs security of supply vs ghg emmissions?
Table 1 might be easier to follow as a stacked line graph.
Explain "non-commercial energy".
What do "clean coal" and "raw coal" mean?
Type and quality of coal?
Privatization?
The article seems to be saying that coal is both exported and imported. If so please explain why.
Explain why coal-fired electricity predicted to increase so much. Is this in existing or new coal-fired power stations?
How fast can existing coal-fired stations be ramped up and down to complement renewable energy?
Coking coal?
Risk of new fossil fuel power stations becoming stranded assets?
Why is oil both imported and exported? Type of oil?
How much oil use can be substituted by electricity e.g. by electrification of land and sea transport?
Table 3 hard to understand - say what sector enterprises in and/or link their pages.
Add pie chart of power plant fuel types.
Economics of replacing some gas use with solar power?
Population and economic growth forecasts e.g. for increase in air conditioning vs increase in solar power.
What are industry and households using the energy for?
Economics e.g. subsidies and taxes?
GHG emissions per person?
Fugitive methane?
Possible to manufacture solar panels and wind turbines?
Use of energy by rich compared poor.
Heating and cooling e.g. solar thermal for hot water?
Capital investment including from overseas?
International grid connections - electricity import export?
https://www.pv-tech.org/news/vietnam-grid-upgrades-early-but-no-match-for-solar-and-wind-additions