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Foolkiller[edit]

I've addressed the deficiency of references in this article. They are now there. I still think this article has potential being that it is a comic book character that is obscure, non superhero, yet interesting.Mr. ATOZ 03:16, 15 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

  • It's great that you decided to bring this to peer review. A few pointers (some taken from the FAC nomination of this article);
  1. The lead section is too short.
  2. The "Foolkiller (Marvel, 1990-91) ten-issue limited series" should be removed, as it's a gallery of fair use pictures, which isn't allowed.
  3. None of the footnotes seem to be working.
  4. Powers and abilities section should be turned into prose.
  5. The "Memorable Quotes" section belongs in Wikiquote, not here.
  6. The disambiguation line at the very top should be removed, as it points to non-existant articles.

«LordViD» 08:36, 15 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]