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German destroyer Z39[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get it to FA. I had previously nominated it, but it was pointed out to me that it lacked a lot of context. I have built up the context and backround info a lot since then, and want to see if people think it is ready for FAC, or if it needs a lot more work.

Thanks, Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 06:33, 24 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'm pretty sure this article could become FA in the future but there are few things that bother me:

Red links tend to be discouraged (unless the article exists in another wikipedia)
I would recommend expanding the lead just a bit.
Most of the first section are only one paragraph long. I would suggest splitting them into two with each paragraph having its own theme.
Done where possible. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Every reference is a book. While readers might have to take good faith, I suggest searching for online sources too to make reviewers approve it. Maybe Google Books has some of them.
Google Books has quite a few in preview or snippet view. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Good luck with the article. If possible could you comment in this peer review? Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 20:16, 30 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]