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Skjortonsdagen är en uråldrig tradition som hade sin höjdpunkt under renässansen. Människor har i alla tider avsätt onsdagen till att hedra ett av historiens mest populära plagg, skjortan. Det har inte varit helt ovanligt med skjortbål under dessa högtidsdagar då människor offrade skjortor till gudarna. Denna del av skjortonsdagen dog dock ut i slutet av 1880-talet. Att skjortonsdagen har haft en positiv påverkan råder det inga tvivel på då den t.ex var en starkt bidragande orsak till Italiens enande 1848 och satte stopp för folkmordet i Rwanda.

Grass

Grass, an important topic, could become Featured. To do so, it needs to be improved. Please share ideas about how to do so. Chipka 15:31, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

As a disambiguation page, the chances of this article become featured anytime soon is very unlikely - perhaps you might want to work on Poaceae instead? Anyway,

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Thanks, AndyZ _t 16:24, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]