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Harry and the Potters (album)[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because, I am currently editing the GA Harry and the Potters article and the FLC Harry and the Potters discography. I have asked for a peer review for this article along with other albums by Harry and the Potters to receive feedback to edit these articles to achieve B or even GA status. I believe this could also help achieve featured article and featured list status on the other articles. I would appreciate all comments and suggestions on expanding this article and all other Harry and the Potters albums, as the band does not receive much press 'attention', I would like to know what lyrical content can be displayed and how this can be formatted.

Thanks, Hpfan9374 (talk) 03:25, 16 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: Its better to expand this article for how many folds. Try to run for a re-PR and you'll get reviews. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 06:01, 21 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Firstly, thanks for commenting. Whats folds mean? I am looking for any ideas or suggestions, on what I can add to the 'background' section as the band is not in the media much, and what information I could include in a 'lyrical content' subheading, aswell as how I can format the 'personnel'. I would highly appreciate any and all suggestions or direct edits. Thankyou! Hpfan9374 (talk) 00:02, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You need to bulk up the article for how many times from its size (as of now). But it does not mean you really have to work hard on it. Just make sure you have the production or what transpired of making that album. And you have it. The album was inspired by JK's novel. Its a good start. Expand that and be sure you have proper inline citations. For lyrical content, find some album reviews. You might find several helpful informations (you might also find musical style their). --BritandBeyonce (talk) 00:46, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. Thanks again. Hpfan9374 (talk) 00:51, 22 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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