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Harry and the Potters discography[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because… it has failed to achieve featured list status twice, it also went through peer review before, yet only an automated review was given. I would like to know how I can improve the article, so that it follows the criteria. Length has been addressed and now am wondering how it can become "a timeline of important events on a notable topic" - I believe it requires third-party sources, however I am unable of finding any. I am looking for any suggestions about improving the article, meeting the criteria or if you would be so kind, directly editing the article. Thanks! Hpfan9374 (talk) 14:02, 9 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR _t 01:56, 11 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]