Wikipedia:Peer review/Hey Ya!/archive1

Hey Ya![edit]

I've been working on this article for the past day and a half, and I think it's just about FA quality. Any suggestions on what can be improved before taking it to FAC would be very helpful. ShadowHalo 16:10, 4 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Keep just the one picture of Andre 3000 as an entire band, polaroid joke is unnecessary. Alientraveller 16:19, 4 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

How about expanding the caption to "'Shaking it like a Polaroid picture', a phrase popularized by the song and its music video."? The image certainly wasn't meant as a joke. For anyone who hasn't used instant film before, I think it's important to show what it is (especially considering it doesn't have much to do with "shaking it"). ShadowHalo 16:51, 4 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The lyrics of "Hey Ya!" open with a description the persona's concerns and doubts about a romantic relationship"....What is "Persona"??

"The song's pop rock origins allowed it some crossover success,"...can't digest the sentence.Can be controversial.

The whole first paragraph of the COVER VERSIONS section seems to be unscourced. User:Luxurious.gaurav