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Indian National Congress

I've listed this article for peer review because I think that this article has Good Article potential. The article is properly sourced, well written and formated. Based on what I've seen from other GA Political Parties (BJP for example). I think that Indian National Congress meets the GA criteria. If any editors could led their suggestions and/or opinions to help/improve the article, I'd very much appreciate it.

Thanks, Akhiljaxxn (talk) 05:40, 4 June 2018 (UTC)

Few thoughts

• Many things are unreferenced - headquarters at Akbar Road, Lok Sabha and Rajya Sabha leader etc. I have added some citation needed tags.

 Done No more citation tags.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

• often called Congress - I think it is often called Congress party, not simply Congress

 Done. Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

• I think Pattabhi Sitaramayya here is a WP:Primary Source and hence a better one is required.

 Done Better source added.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

• the rest were of Parsi and Jain backgrounds - how many Parsis and Jains?

 Done This sentence removed.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

• new "extremists" - " " marks must be removed. It is a well established fact that Tilak, Ghosh were amongst the extremist faction.

 Done.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

• One or two sentence about Jinnah's Hindu-Muslim unity mission in his early life?

 Done.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 09:53, 25 June 2018 (UTC)

• He formed an alliance with the Khilafat Movement in 1920 - Did he form an alliance with the Khilafat movement or during the Khilafat movement?

Gandhi formed an alliance with the Khilafat movement.Not during the khilafat movement.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

• The section - "Congress as a mass movement" needs to be composed better.

RRD (talk) 08:40, 23 June 2018 (UTC)