Wikipedia:Peer review/Jumpsuit/archive1

Jumpsuit[edit]

I find this a good article about a certain type of garment. The only things missing is perhaps some more notes as to the history of the garment and about manufactoring. John Anderson 14:01, 15 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, but it's a little on the short side, and like you pointed out it's missing a history. Also the bulleted lists should be replaced with regular text. Thanks. :) — RJH 14:47, 15 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

as RJH noted it is a bit on the short side and having the picture running down the whole right side of the article hardly seems ideal, perhaps it can be scaled down or a better free use image can be found of a person in a jumpsuit. Jtkiefer ^{T | @ | C} ----- 07:19, August 18, 2005 (UTC)