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Kamalapur railway station[edit]

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I am planning to make it Good article. That's why I expended the article. I request all to give advises and suggestions that will help me to make it Good article.

Thanks, Mehedi Abedin 07:38, 13 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720[edit]

Comments after a quick skim:

The lede is quite short. Consider expanding it per MOS:LEDE
There are a lot of one-paragraph sections, which is sometimes discouraged on Wikipedia per MOS:OVERSECTION. Can some of these be merged or expanded into more paragraphs?
" Swatta,[57] Fereshte,[58] Istition[59] etc." The ect is not necessary and should be removed.
There are too many images in the article. The images should support the information that it is above. Expanding the article will give more space for images, but some should still be removed.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 16:58, 14 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]