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Kaneto Shindo[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to receive feedback on the current status of the article and what is lacking overall.

Thanks, JoshuSasori (talk) 02:50, 27 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment from Lucky102

I think this is a very good article, the only thing I would do is add a picture of Kaneto Shindo himself and put it in the infobox.

Thanks for your comment. I agree that it would be better with an image. An image was recently removed from the article due to a copyright issue. I will try to look for something which can be used. JoshuSasori (talk) 04:21, 31 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lucky102 (talk) 20:39, 29 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment from Lugnuts

Excellent work on the expansion/cleanup. The External links section seems to violate WP:NOTLINK (IMO). I believe only the Japanese Film Database and IMDB should be here. The others could be intergrated into the main body of the article as inline references. Lugnuts ^{And the horse} 07:25, 3 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Lugnuts. I have removed some of the links. There is more work to do on Shindo's themes and style. The problem is that the current article is based on reading his books, so it would be nice to have a more objective input. But the critical reviews of his work in English are a bit lacking in depth. JoshuSasori (talk) 08:54, 11 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]