Wikipedia:Peer review/Led Zeppelin/archive1

Before I begin: I realize this is not a particularly good article. It has a long way to go. Please focus on the writing of the article; no need to point out the obvious, saying "add citations" or "add references". That's stuff to be saved for later. This article needs to be attacked from the bottom up, and the writing is always the thing that should addressed first. Kindly leave comments. TheImpossibleMan 04:56, 9 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

You perhaps have the wrong forum for this type of activity. Please read the first few paragraphs of this page. Thank you. — RJH 14:34, 10 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The introduction alone is somewhat speculative and unconvincing, to use another editor's words. --Knucmo2 21:50, 13 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

A few more photos of the band in action perhaps? Or Album covers --Knucmo2 17:14, 16 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

All the photos should have a rationale of fair use written for them. -- 21:09, 17 April 2006 (UTC)