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Thanks, FourLights (talk) 20:01, 10 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'd try and avoid quoting things that can merely be rephrased such as "bored with Li's arrogance" and "planned the organization of the six ministries, shared in the drafting of a new law code, and supervised the compilations of the History of Yuan, the Ancestral Instructions and the Ritual Compendium of the Ming Dynasty."
I'd avoid things like "the History of Mingbiography" because it is evident in the source.

more to come. Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 16:18, 21 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]