Wikipedia:Peer review/Life on the Fast Lane/archive1

Life on the Fast Lane[edit]

Aim to get this to FA at some point in the future, currently a GA. Need to get some creative imput from elsewhere. Based on FAs Homer's Phobia and Cape Feare. Gran² 16:41, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The production section needs to be rewritten. Right now it reads like a list without bullet points. Alientraveller 18:27, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've re-written it. Any better? Gran² 18:36, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Better, still reads like someone's in a hurry, but I think sectioning and combining related info would the way to go. Alientraveller 19:09, 27 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with Alientraveller. I also think that you should consider making a "Theme" section in which you discuss this episode in relation to other Simpson episodes where either Homer or Marge is attracted to another person. --Maitch 09:54, 29 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]