Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Adventures of Mini-Goddess episodes/archive1

List of Adventures of Mini-Goddess episodes

• A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for December 2008.

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to move this to FL. However, I'm not entirely sure what an FL would include, so I'd like to run this article/list through here first.

Thanks, DARTH PANDA^duel 02:10, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Comments by Goodraise (talk · contribs)

• The list is insufficiently categorized.
  • I added a single category, but I couldn't think of anything else to add... NOCTURNENOIR^talk 13:04, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
• The lead needs a complete overhaul, using other episode lists from Category:FL-Class anime and manga articles as examples.
• The list as a whole needs cleanup. MOS violations include:
  • References shouldn't state the language, if it is English.
    • Fixed. NOCTURNENOIR^talk 13:04, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
  • Some references are missing a publisher.
    • Fixed. NOCTURNENOIR^talk 02:07, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
  • The caption of the image in the lead is overly long.
    • Fixed. NOCTURNENOIR^talk 13:04, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
  • There should be no bolded text in the lead.
    • Fixed. NOCTURNENOIR^talk 02:07, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
  • The list shouldn't start with "This is an episode listing".
    • Fixed. NOCTURNENOIR^talk 02:07, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
  • The kanji and romanization of the series' title should only be given in the main article, not here.
    • Fixed. NOCTURNENOIR^talk 02:07, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
  • Using parentheses within the prose should be avoided if possible. For example, "distributed in North America by Pioneer Entertainment (now Geneon Entertainment)" could be changed to "distributed in North America by Geneon Entertainment, formerly known as Pioneer Entertainment".
    • Fixed. NOCTURNENOIR^talk 02:07, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
• Lastly, I suspect, the list will need a thorough copy-edit. But, that's not exactly my strong side...

Hope this was helpful. Good luck. -- Goodraise (talk) 03:03, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

• I just realized that I had fixed the other list I had on pr... Crossed out items are now fixed on this list. NOCTURNENOIR^talk 02:02, 24 December 2008 (UTC)