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List of Coppa Italia finals

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I have listed this article for peer review because I want to name the page for Featured List. I am aware that the quality of the article is not high and I would like some advice to raise the quality of this article. ~~I would like to get the Four Award for this page.~~ Thanks, Dr Salvus (talk) 20:15, 14 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Drive by comment from Goldsztajn

Apologies for raining on the parade ... per WT:FOUR Featured Lists are not eligible for the Four Award: Q8: Are articles nominated for featured lists status eligible? A8: No. The featured list editorial process is different from the featured article process. FOUR is meant to recognize the article-development process, not the list-development process. --Goldsztajn (talk) 05:15, 19 February 2021 (UTC) >:OK thanks. ~~I will surely have misread the rules of the Four Award. Could you still help me make the page an FL? Dr Salvus (talk) 22:48, 19 February 2021 (UTC)~~[reply]

Comments from Goldsztajn

Lead is somewhat long, consider shortening (next point will assist with this).
The text needs copy-editing, consider placing a request with the Guild of Copy Editors (make a request here).
I think I understand what this sentence means, but it is very unclear: "Of the teams for which the Coppa Italia is not the only competition ever won, for Napoli, Internazionale, Roma, Parma, Fiorentina, Sampdoria, Torino, and Genoa, the victory in a final also represents the last time they won a trophy. In other words, for 8 teams which have won other competitions, the Coppa represents the last trophy they have won, yes?
footballhistory.org cites Wikipedia as a source, this makes footballhistory.org unreliable.
floating footnotes following section headings - move these to the table heading.
The table "Results by Team" has a gold and silver column, for most readers this would imply a bronze (ie 3rd) ... better to change to winner, runner-up

Regards, --Goldsztajn (talk) 14:02, 19 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Goldsztajn: thank you very much. But I think that your advice to insert the third place column is not feasible because the third place final is not contemplated in the Italian Cup (it was foreseen between the 1950s and 1960s) Cheers Dr Salvus (talk) 22:57, 19 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I did what you proposed except for the last one Dr Salvus (talk) 23:27, 19 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Salve Dr Salvus; ho fatto alcune modifiche, fammi sapere cosa ne pensi. Regards, --Goldsztajn (talk) 09:01, 20 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GoldsztajnTi ringrazio. Secondo te questo articolo è pronto per essere quantomeno un GA? Fammi sapere e se non fosse pronto puoi aiutarmi a migliorare l'articolo Dr Salvus (talk) 12:22, 20 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]